[stylist] Hindsight story- editing sample

[Debby Phillips]

Very nice job of making this a much more readable story.  One 
comment: warn, w a r n: to make sure that people know of 
something that's about to happen.  Like: I warn you, there will 
be a storm this afternoon, or I warn you, if you do that again, 
you will be puncshed.  Worn: w o r n: tired, or old, like the 
woman had on a worn-looking dress.  So the autumn leaves would be 
worn w o r n.  Just a pet peeve of stine.  (Smile).    Debby