[stylist] Hindsight story- editing sample

[Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter]

Okay, thank you, Debbi, I thought it was suppose to be warm, like hot, I
didn't think to check character-by-character. I notice a lot of these kind
of spelling errors where the homonym is incorrectly used in this piece.

Bridgit

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Subject: Re: [stylist] Hindsight story- editing sample

Very nice job of making this a much more readable story.  One
comment: warn, w a r n: to make sure that people know of something that's
about to happen.  Like: I warn you, there will be a storm this afternoon, or
I warn you, if you do that again, you will be puncshed.  Worn: w o r n:
tired, or old, like the woman had on a worn-looking dress.  So the autumn
leaves would be 
worn w o r n.  Just a pet peeve of stine.  (Smile).    Debby

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