[stylist] Hindsight story with some revisions

[Debby Phillips]

Well Jennifer, in some ways it's better but you are still using 
too much description.  It isn't necessary to describe the flag, 
or to call it a patriotic flag.  The flag isn't patriotic.  If 
you need to describe it, you could say the American flag, or 
something like that.  Kelly is still inconsistently spelled, 
sometimes you end it with e y, sometimes you write it using l l y 
to spell it.  And you need to use Spell Check.    Peace,    Cebby