[stylist] Bipolar Astronaut, Parts 1 and 2

[Slery]

Great thoughts, Tessa, now this is the story I definitely want to read.
Cindy


On July 29, 2017 6:41:53 AM Tessa via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

> Interesting, I love sci fi. I do have a few thoughts, I think you need to
> ramp up the sci fi aspect of things more, as it sits at the moment this
> story could be occurring today in any hospital, presumably if we've got a
> medical facility stationed on or in orbit around Jupiter then we'd also
> have the tech to do away with needles and pills, you need something more
> sci fi more direct something like perhaps patches on the scalp to direct
> medication to exactly where it is needed. what about the gravity of the
> station, is it earth normal or something else and how does that effect the
> patient. What about jupiter itself seeing it through the port, how does
> that make him feel, depressed, elated?
> you might want to explain what or how the cycler works, I'm unclear about
> the chicken dinner first there's roast beef at the med bay then mention of
> a chicken dinner, is this a memory or does it take a length of time for the
> cycler to get them from the medbay to the jupiter facility and so Byte has
> time to make food. And what about the food itself, chicken and roast beef
> seem like quite sofisticated foods for space is the food real or
> reconstituted out of animal and vegetable proteins, or worse yet made from
> flavoured yeast pellets. I like the comment about the fake eggs.
> This is interesting and a unique look at sci fi from a probably mostly
> untouched aspect, keep up the good work.
> Tessa
>
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